The Football Agent System

Chapter 81 - 80: Too Good to Keep Testing II



He created the opening goal by beating his man on the outside and cutting the ball back into the six-yard box, no fuss to it, a striker’s finish doing the rest. Later he scored one himself, arriving unmarked at the back post on a move he’d started himself three passes earlier, ghosting into space nobody had quite tracked.

They swapped him to the right for a spell, and he stayed just as sharp from the other side. When the coaches changed the defender marking him midway through, a different body, different habits, he adjusted inside a couple of touches instead of needing the whole half to work the man out. His last actions, deep into the block, legs tired by then, stayed as clean as his first ones had.

The game did not stop to admire any of it. His teammates just started asking for the ball more, calling his name earlier, trusting the pass would come back better than it left. Defenders began doubling him whenever he got it, two bodies instead of one, which was not an insult. It was simply what you did to a winger who was starting to cost you.

Sander, the striker, got visibly annoyed when the coaches swapped Jay onto the opposing side for the last ten minutes. He’d already built trust in the ball landing on his foot from that flank, and losing it for a spell clearly bothered him more than losing a scrimmage should have.

Aksel, back marking him for that stretch, competed like it mattered, proper contact, proper concentration, nothing gentle about it. Not a lesson for a trialist anymore. First-team work, plain and simple.

Jay expected something after the session ended. A review, a sit-down, someone telling him what all of that had meant.

He got the normal recovery instructions instead, and the next day’s schedule pinned up same as always. Nobody said a word about anything else. He had no idea the staff had already started talking about him in a different room entirely.

In the changing room afterward, Fredrik told him quietly that the group had noticed how fast he’d settled in, that it wasn’t nothing to earn that in two weeks. Aksel, packing his bag beside them, added his own line without much ceremony, that clubs could still sit on a decision even when they liked what they saw, so Jay shouldn’t get ahead of himself yet.

Jay took both for what they were and left it there.

He called home again that night, properly this time, not the short version he’d given the first week.

He told his mum the second week had gone well, that he was settling in, that he’d started making a couple of proper mates out here despite the cold and the food he still couldn’t order right. He kept it honest without reaching for anything he couldn’t promise. Nothing about a contract. Nothing about what any of it meant yet, because nothing had actually been said to him.

She sounded stronger than she had on the last call, steadier in a way that let something in Jay’s chest loosen for the first time in days. He put the phone down after and didn’t pick it back up to check it twice the way he had every night that first week. He just slept.

The final session of the week gave him no room to hide in one job.

The coaches moved him through roles like they were testing whether the last fortnight had been real or just a good run in one shape. Touchline winger to start. Then inverted, arriving through the middle instead of hugging the line. A spell in the second pressing line, doing the unglamorous work of screening a passing lane rather than chasing the ball. A short stretch on the right, his weaker side by habit if not by ability. Marked by Aksel for one block, by Didrik, the reserve full-back who’d bounced him around midweek in his first week, for another.

He was clean in every one of them. What actually startled the coaches watching from the touchline was not that he adapted, but how fast. A new instruction did not need three days to settle into his legs anymore. It arrived, and inside a rep or two he was already living inside it, no lag between hearing something and doing it right.

The last meaningful action of the week came with his legs nearly gone.

He still found a teammate with a pass that created a clean chance, tired past the point where most players started cutting corners. Then, instead of chasing the outcome or admiring the ball he’d just played, he turned and recovered into his defensive shape before anyone had to shout at him to do it.

Quality with the ball. Discipline the second after it left his foot. That combination, more than any single moment across the fortnight, was the one that finally closed the last gap in the coaching staff’s doubt.

Jay had already left the building by the time the meeting started.

Espen, Kjetil, and Sindre sat around the same small office table where Garcia had once sat with a cooling coffee in front of him, except now the conversation had nowhere near that much patience left in it.

Jay had exceeded every mark they’d set for the first two weeks, and nobody in the room argued otherwise. His tactical learning speed was the thing everyone kept circling back to, faster than anything Espen said he’d seen from a trialist in years. He had folded into the squad without disturbing a single relationship inside it, which mattered more to a small club than people outside football tended to understand. His physical level held up fine against OBOS-ligaen bodies, and his attacking output, if it carried into a real matchday, would improve options the club badly needed for next season.

He was still a free agent. Every day they waited was a day some other club could start making calls of its own.

Espen wanted to move immediately, contract terms drawn up and on the table before the week was out.

Kjetil didn’t disagree with the assessment. He simply wasn’t willing to move that fast off two good weeks, however good they’d been. He wanted week three to confirm the level held under continued load, background checks completed properly rather than rushed, medical work finished the way it was supposed to be finished before anyone signed anything binding. Nobody in the room could call that unreasonable, not even Espen, who clearly wanted to.

They settled on it. If Jay held the same level through week three, they would cancel the fourth week entirely and put a formal offer in front of him.

Nobody would tell Jay any of that. He would simply be told to keep training with the strongest group, same as the message he’d already been given, and left to read into it whatever he wanted.

Before the room broke up, Sindre set the unsigned evaluation file down on the table between them, flat, deliberate.

"He’s free to talk to anyone until we’ve got his signature," he said. "Anyone. Today, tomorrow, next week."

Kjetil looked at the file for a moment, then nodded once, and did not change his answer.

One more week.

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