Chapter 2: Tim Baer II
"You are a grown man, stop speaking jargons. If I was in the MC’s shoes.
I would do better, for fuck’s sake I would have brought the entire Fantasiaa world to my feet.
How can you write someone to be so powerful and weak at the same time?
Why does the MC spare his foes almost all the time and those same foe will come back to hurt his loved ones?
There are too many plot holes in your book.
Like any little thing, he would receive a blessing from his goddess, such bullocks.
Just face it, you are a trash author. it is my job to weed out the bad novels and your novel is trash.
You imagine for yourself, do you think the MC is realistic.
The MC is too nice, he is too dumb, he is too naïve and he is too lucky. Everything just falls into the palms of his hands.
That is not a story, that is just trash!
I can’t even imagine if someone like that actually existed." Tim said, further shredding the author.