From Overlord To Multiverse.
Chapter 5: Leaving Village.
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Inside a wooden house, three siblings slept under the same blanket.
Lioro lay on the floor, trying to sleep.
Or at least, he tried.
An intense gaze from his left made it impossible. Even after hours had passed, it didn't waver. If anything, it felt stronger.
Annoyance crept up his spine.
Enough was enough.
Lioro opened his eyes and turned to his left.
It was Ninya, his second eldest sister.
She was staring at him, eyes sparkling with excitement.
"Is something wrong...?" Lioro asked, the corners of his mouth twitching.
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