Chapter 7: Leaving
This Chapter is already engaging, but I can refine it for smoother readability, better emotional depth, and stronger tension without altering its essence. Here's the revised version:
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Chapter 7: Leaving (1)
"Y-YOU—YOU'RE A MISTAKE!!" The holy servant's voice trembled with shock, her already pale skin turning even whiter.
"A mistake? That's impossible! We've summoned countless Mages before!" The king's voice wavered, as if refusing to accept the reality before him.
"Can someone explain what's going on?" Kenji asked, his confusion growing. The way they spoke about him made it seem like he was some kind of failed experiment.
"Yeah, what's wrong with Kenji-san?" Miyuki chimed in, her brows furrowed. She wasn't particularly fond of Kenji, but among their group, she had the most respect for him.
The king turned to her, then pointed at Kenji. "He has a class, sure. But his class is that of an Animal Tamer." His tone was laced with disgust.
"So what? He can tame beasts. Isn't that still useful?" Haru interjected, trying to make sense of the situation.