Chapter 125: Masters [1]
Nathan and Liaraen left Selene’s house at dawn.
The elven master lived at the western edge of Greywall, in the neighborhood of retired artisans, where the streets were wider than in the center and where the houses had back courtyards with trees planted decades ago. Selene had sent the letter of introduction three days earlier. The response had arrived the night before with two lines written in formal Elven: Receive the second daughter of House Sael’thoryn at the hour of dawn. The Hunter may accompany her if he keeps silence during the evaluation.
Liaraen had read the response and passed it to Nathan without additional comment.
Nathan had read it twice before asking.
“Sprout.”
“Yes?”
“Is the part about me keeping silence diplomatic formality or literal instruction?”
“It’s literal instruction. Retired elven masters have their own protocols. If he wrote ‘silence during the evaluation,’ it means he doesn’t expect you to speak during the entire first visit. You can be present but not comment. If you break the protocol, he’ll probably reject me as a student because he’ll interpret that I don’t know how to control my companion.”
“And if he asks me something?”
“I’m not going to ask you anything during the visit. If I have questions, I’ll save them for afterward. He’ll understand that’s part of my self-regulation as an applicant.”
“Alright. Silence during the evaluation.”
“Correct.”
They walked through the dawn streets with the cool air still clinging to the cobblestone. Nathan’s right flank no longer bled at the bandage edges, but the two broken ribs still protested every long step. He walked at a pace Liaraen deliberately moderated so as not to force him.
She carried the lineage sword at her belt this time. In its dark green leather sheath, with the pommel visible but not displayed. The dress was also different from the guild visit: a long cream-colored piece with small green embroidery at the lower edge, the only garment from the Vaelith wardrobe she had chosen with care for this specific appointment.
Nathan glanced at her as they walked.
“Sprout.”
“Yes?”
“You dressed for him.”
“I dressed for House Sael’thoryn. He’s going to evaluate me as a representative of the house before evaluating me as an applicant to be his student. If I arrive dressed like a common human citizen, the message I send is that I don’t represent the lineage. If I arrive with green embroidery and the sword visible, the message is that I come as heir.”
“Alright.”
“Problem?”
“No. I was asking because the embroidery is new. I hadn’t seen it on you during the return journey from Aelthoren.”
“Lady Marell sent it when I was already leaving. She put it in the trunk the day before departure without me realizing. I found it two days ago when I started looking for something appropriate for today.”
“They’re discreet.”
“They’re the standard for formal elven visits. Discreet for elves. Visible to anyone who recognizes the embroidery.”
“Alright.”
They walked three more blocks in silence. Then Liaraen spoke again.
“Nathan.”
“Yes?”
“If he rejects me, don’t react. Not with anger, not with an attempt to defend me, not asking for explanations. You’re going to let me handle it. If he rejects, I’ll bow, thank him for the time, and we leave. On the way back we evaluate what we do.”
“I accept.”
“Do you accept for real, or do you accept because I asked and you’re going to improvise in the moment?”
“I accept for real. I understand that an intervention from me during the rejection validates him in his decision and takes away any future space for reconsideration. I’ll stay still.”
“I appreciate it.”
They turned the last corner. The elven master’s house appeared at the end of the street, with the small front courtyard surrounded by a low wooden fence painted dark green. The garden was tended with precision: herbs in exact rows, a small bush pruned into a round shape, two flat stones marking the path from the fence to the door.
Nathan assessed it as they approached.
The garden work suggested someone who lived alone, who maintained the property himself, and who treated the care of the space as daily physical exercise. Nothing was neglected. Nothing was exaggerated either.
Liaraen opened the fence gate with her thumb on the latch.
She entered first.
Nathan followed two steps behind.
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The house door opened before Liaraen reached the step.
An elf appeared in the frame. Tall, approximately Nathan’s height but with the finer bone structure that characterized elderly elves. Long hair pulled back in a low tail tied with a brown leather cord. The hair color was a greenish gray, which Nathan interpreted as typical of elves who had passed four hundred years. The face without visible wrinkles but with a presence that couldn’t be confused with youth.
He wore garden work clothes: a short tunic to the hip, loose pants, and bare feet on the flat stones leading to the entrance step.
Nathan assessed him with passive Soul Sense while Liaraen made the formal elven bow he had seen only once during the Vaelith house visit.
The elf’s signature was contained but dense. He didn’t carry an active divine seal, but he did have the energy weave of someone who had handled seals for decades. A retired or inactive bearer. Possibly of Yeva, based on the configuration of the residual lines.
Soul Sense also registered something else.
The elf was evaluating him at the same time.
Not with a visible skill. With something older: the trained attention of someone who had spent centuries learning to read presences without needing to activate anything.
Nathan maintained the relaxed posture. Without shutting off Soul Sense, without turning it up beyond normal. He let the elf read him.
Liaraen finished the bow.
“Master Thalenor Vireth. I appreciate the audience. I am Liaraen Sael’thoryn, second daughter of Aeren and Vessarel Sael’thoryn, heir recognized by House Vaelith after the fall of my direct line.”
The elf inclined his head once. The gesture was brief but exact.
“Liaraen Sael’thoryn. I remember your father. I met your mother during three diplomatic dinners in Aelthoren forty years ago. I mourn the loss of both and of your elder sister, whose name I will not use until we confirm whether she is alive or dead.”
“I appreciate the courtesy of open protocol regarding Aelinne. Most people assume death without confirmation.”
“Most people prefer closure to precision. I prefer precision. Come in.”
Thalenor stepped aside. Liaraen entered first. Nathan followed without speaking.
The house inside was larger than the facade suggested. The entrance hallway opened into a rectangular room with light wood flooring, two large windows at the back overlooking the rear courtyard, and a long dark wooden table at the center with four chairs around it. The walls were almost empty except for three wooden shelves with leather-bound books in green and a lectern in the corner with an open parchment Nathan couldn’t read from the distance.
In the rear courtyard, visible through the windows, there was a cleared space of packed earth with a thick vertical wooden post in the center. A training space.
Thalenor closed the entrance door. He turned to Liaraen.
“Sit.”
Liaraen sat in one of the chairs at the long table. Thalenor sat in the opposite one. Nathan remained standing at the edge of the room, near the wall, without approaching the table.
Thalenor noticed.
He looked at him directly for the first time.
“Hunter.”
Nathan inclined his head once without speaking.
“Sit as well. The chair to Liaraen’s right. You’re not going to speak during the evaluation, but I don’t want you standing for two hours with broken ribs. My house, my rules. Sit.”
Nathan walked to the chair. Sat carefully. Kept his hands on the table in view. Didn’t speak.
Thalenor returned his attention to Liaraen.
“We’re going to talk for approximately one hour before I decide whether I accept you as a student. During that hour I’m going to ask you questions about your prior instruction, your direct lineage with the sword, your understanding of the enchantment you carry, and your intention regarding what you want to learn here. If at any point my question seems intrusive, you tell me and I skip it. If at any point you feel you can’t continue, you tell me and we stop.”
“I understand the conditions.”
“First question. Who taught you to hold the sword before today?”
Liaraen thought for a moment before responding.
“No one. My father kept the sword as a hidden ceremonial object. I didn’t know of its existence until approximately eight weeks ago, when the enchantment activated during the visit I made to the family mansion ruins along with Nathan. Since then I’ve used the sword in real combat three times. All three times the enchantment guided my movements without me understanding the technique. On the first occasion, when I still didn’t know what the enchantment was, I thought I had natural talent. On the second occasion I understood that the enchantment was compensating for my lack of instruction. On the third occasion, nine days ago, the enchantment kept guiding me but at several moments during the fight I felt out of sync with the blade. As if it knew what was going to happen before I did and my muscles didn’t respond to the rhythm it was asking for.”
Thalenor didn’t react to the answer. He had listened to it complete. He processed for a few seconds.
“The desynchronization is predictable. The Sael’thoryn enchantment is designed to collaborate with a trained bearer, not to replace technique. When the bearer doesn’t have the base, the enchantment compensates, but compensates badly. The blade will direct you toward correct positions, but your body will be in incorrect positions for that direction. The result is that you win the fights by a smaller margin than you should win them, and you accumulate wounds a trained bearer would have avoided entirely.”
“That description matches what I experienced.”
“Good. Second question. What do you want to learn here?”
Liaraen thought longer this time.
“I want to learn the base technique that allows me to work with the enchantment as a collaborator, not as a substitute. I want to be able to close the gap between what the sword knows and what my body responds. I want to reduce avoidable wounds in the coming fights. And long term, when I return to Aelthoren to claim the house, I want to be able to hold the sword before the elven Tribunal with the posture my father would have expected of me.”
Thalenor nodded.
“That last part is the most important.”
“Why?”
“Because the elven Tribunal doesn’t accept heirs who can’t hold the lineage weapon with the correct posture. If you appear before them handling the sword by intuition and enchantment, the Tribunal interprets that House Sael’thoryn hasn’t correctly recognized its heir. They can vote against your formal recognition. In that case, the house passes to Vaelith administration until a technically apt heir appears, which can take generations if the direct lineage is broken.”
Liaraen pressed her fingers on the edge of the table.