Mahabharat: Shiva's Last Variable

Chapter 57 - 55: Truth’s Out... Devara’s Vow...



(A/N):

Drop a meme here that you find funny. Or reflects your mood.

<You have any intresting stories about demons which could be useful> --> Comment here.

-------------------------------------------------

The tension did not vanish with the fall of the scouts.

It only... shifted.

Across the thinning crowd, relief came first.

A fragile one. The kind that dares not breathe too loudly.

Vasudeva steadied himself, then gently helped Devaki to her feet.

Her steps were weak, but her grip on the child—unyielding.

They approached. Carefully. Gratefully.

Vasudeva bowed with respect. Not deeply.

But with sincerity carved into the gesture.

"You have our thanks..."

His voice carried exhaustion, but also dignity.

"...whether you intended to help us or not."

Devara shook his head slightly. Calm. Measured.

While his eyes scanned the man who looked like he was already half dead.

Shows how much difficulty

"I did."

That answer... landed.

"I knew they were watching you."

Silence followed after he told the truth.

"...."

"...."

"...."

A heavier kind as Vasudeva looked at the young man before him.

Devara’s gaze lingered on them—not judging, not pressing, but seeing.

"Who are you?" he asked.

"And why are men like them hunting you?"

The question hung in the air.

Devaki’s fingers tightened.

"...."

"...."

Vasudeva’s eyes flickered once—toward the fallen scouts, then the crowd... then back to Devara.

A glance passed between husband and wife.

A silent exchange between the husband and wife.

Then—A sigh.

-Sigh!

"...Not here,"

Vasudeva said quietly looking around the gathering crowd.

He could feel all. The whispers. The watching eyes.

The shifting curiosity of the crowd.

"...Can we speak somewhere else?"

Devara nodded without hesitation.

-Nod!

"...."

He turned slightly—Toward Prince Shakuni.

"Take care of this."

Shakuni’s lips curved faintly as he self joked about how he didn’t get the chance to fight the enemy.

"Finally, something within my skill set."

And then—The disguise fell as he carefully removed it.

Not dramatically. Not with light or sound.

Prince Shakuni stood revealed to the public who can see who he was.

For a moment—The crowd froze.

"...."

"...."

"...."

Then—Shock rippled through them.

"Prince Shakuni?!"

"Was he here the whole time—?"

"What is happening—?"

Shakuni raised a hand lazily, as if calming children.

"Enough noise."

His tone was light.

But the authority beneath it—Absolute.

Guards arrived swiftly. Called without words. They could see who was standing before them.

"These three,"

Prince Shakuni said, gesturing to the broken scouts,

"are to be taken into custody."

A pause. Then, quieter—

"Alive."

The guards nodded. No questions asked. Who were they to question a prince.

-Nods!

The chaos began to settle.

Controlled by Devara and Ashwathama.

Contained by now arrived guards who started defusing the situations.

Meanwhile—

Devara and Ashwatthama had already moved.

They guided the couple through the dispersing crowd.

A chariot awaited nearby belongs to a one of the public..

Simple. Unmarked.

Devaki was helped inside first.

Carefully as her foot were injured.

Every step measured and carefull.

Vasudeva followed, still holding the child close.

Ashwatthama took position beside them.

Silent.

"...."

Devara stepped in last. As he asked the one who drove the chariot to the royal palace.

And gave him the money for the raid.

The reins moved.

The wheels turned towards the direction of the royal palace.

And Gandhara’s vibrant streets slowly gave way—To quieter roads.

To guarded paths. To the rising silhouette of the royal palace.

While travelling...

Inside the chariot—Silence lingered in the air.

"...."

"...."

"...."

Devaki looked down at the child.

Then briefly... at Devara.

Several Questions in her mind.

Fear of losing her child again.

Uncertainty of what the next second holds for her and her family.

Vasudeva’s jaw tightened slightly.

"...."

His thoughts already ahead—Not here. Not now.

But elsewhere.

To a king of Madura.

Kamsa

What would he do... When he learned?

They were here at Gandhara.

Because men like him—Did not accept interruption.

They answered it as soon as they found what they needed.

The chariot slowed.

Not because of doubt—But because steel had drawn a line across the road.

Royal guards stood firm at the palace gates, spears crossed, eyes sharp even amidst the festival glow.

Torches flickered against their armor, casting long shadows that seemed to test every arrival.

The lead guard stepped forward.

"Halt—identify—"

Before he could finish—Devara moved forward.

The maya1 peeled away.

Not like a disguise removed...

But like a layer of reality quietly stepping aside.

His true presence returned.

Clear. Unhidden from the maya1 he had cast on himself.

The young prince stood revealed.

For a brief second—Even the night seemed to pause.

Devaki and Vasudeva stared.

"...."

"...."

"...."

Not at royal attire he was wearing.

Not at status which changed in mere seconds.

But at Devara.

Because the boy they had traveled beside—Now felt... different.

From before he seems to have a Calming effort.

Like standing near still water after days of storm.

Devaki’s grip loosened just slightly.

"...."

Not in weakness.

In relief.

Vasudeva’s eyes narrowed for a moment—Not suspicion.

Recognition of the passive effect around Devara.

’This is no ordinary prince...’

The guards snapped to attention.

"Prince Devara!"

Spears lifted instantly. Heads bowed in respect.

"My apologies, my lord—"

Devara gave a small nod. Nothing more.

-Nod!

"Open the gates."

No command needed repeating. The massive doors parted.

The chariot rolled forward.

Inside—The palace pulsed with life.

Music echoed through corridors.

Servants hurried past carrying silks, flowers, golden trays.

Laughter spilled from distant halls.

A kingdom preparing for union.

Unaware—That another story had just crossed its threshold.

That would bring war to their door steps.

Devara stepped down first.

He turned—Offering his hand.

Devaki hesitated only a moment before accepting.

Carefully—She stepped down.

Vasudeva followed, still holding the child close, his gaze scanning instinctively even within safety.

Ashwatthama remained nearby as he never took his eyes off Vasudeva.

Silent.

"...."

"...."

"...."

Guarding he could feel how much tensed the man was.

Devara’s eyes moved once across them both.

Noticing and Assessing the wounds on their body.

The fatigue on their face.

The strain hidden beneath composure.

He turned to a nearby guard.

"Bring a medic."

The guard didn’t ask why. Didn’t hesitate.

"Yes, my lord!"

He rushed off immediately.

Devara gestured toward the inner corridors.

"This way."

They walked. Through halls alive with celebration.

Past servants who paused briefly, confused by the unfamiliar guests.

Past decorations that seemed too bright... too joyous for the state they were in.

And finally—To a quieter wing.

Guest chambers...

The doors opened.

Inside—Soft light. Clean space to settle. Stillness.

A stark contrast to everything they had endured.

Devaki stepped in slowly.

Almost uncertain of whether did they make the right decision.

Vasudeva followed behind carrying the child.

For the first time in days—They were within walls that did not threaten them the safety of their new born’s life.

The chamber settled into a quieter rhythm.

Whle the medic arrived soon after few minutes.

The medic worked with practiced hands—cleaning wounds, binding feet, checking the infant’s breathing with careful attention.

The child, against all odds, remained calm... as if wrapped in a silence older than fear.

When the medic finally stepped back and bowed—

"They will recover, my lord. They need rest... and safety."

—he left.

The chambers door closed.

And with it—The last layer of distance.

Devara stood still. Watching the couple camly.

Waiting for them to break the silence.

"...."

"...."

"...."

Across from him—Vasudeva and Devaki exchanged a glance.

Not hesitation. Decision to break the truth.

Vasudeva straightened slightly.

"I suppose... we owe you the truth."

His voice carried weight.

Not of pride. But of burden both of them carried.

"I am Vasudeva... of the Surasena lineage."

He paused.

"And this—"

He looked at the woman beside him.

"—is my wife, Devaki."

The name alone seemed to dim the room.

"And this child..."

His gaze lowered.

"...is our ninth son."

Silence pressed in.

"...."

"...."

"...."

Devara’s eyes narrowed ever so slightly.

Not suspicion. But with Calculation.

Vasudeva continued to recall what happened.

"There was a time... when I called Kamsa my friend."

A bitter truth.

"Our kingdoms stood together. Our bond... was real."

His fingers tightened faintly.

"On the day of our wedding procession..."

He inhaled slowly.

"...the sky itself spoke."

Devaki’s hand trembled slightly at the memory.

"A voice. Unseen. Unavoidable. It declared... That one of Devaki’s children ...would be the cause of Kamsa’s death to arrive before him."

The words landed like falling iron.

"In that moment..."

Vasudeva said quietly,

"...my friend died. What remained ...was fear. And fear..."

His eyes hardened,

"...became cruelty. He imprisoned us. Chained us. And as each child was born..."

Devaki’s breathing hitched.

"He killed them."

One. By. One.

The room seemed to shrink.

"...."

"...."

"...."

"Our first... Our second ...our eighth..."

No tears now.

They had long since dried into something deeper.

"Each one taken ...before they could even cry properly in their mother’s arms."

The silence after that—Was unbearable.

"...."

"...."

"...."

Then—A name.

Sage Narada

"He came to us,"

Vasudeva continued with a relived sigh.

-Sigh!

"A sage... who walks between worlds. He told us to flee. To go to Mahendragiri. But to pass through Gandhara."

A pause.

"He said..."

Vasudeva looked up. Directly at Devara.

"...we would meet our savior."

The word lingered in the air.

Between them.

The chamber grew still again.

Devara did not respond immediately.

"...."

Because inside his mind—There were countless thoughts.

Understanding he had on the world were shattered.

’This isn’t right.’

His thoughts sharpened. Fast. Precise. Trying to make sense.

’Ninth child? Then where...

The question rose before he could stop it.

’Where is Krishna? Who should be born as Eighth child?’

No birth. No mention. No miracle.

No protagonist of this world.

The axis of the yuga1—Missing.

For the first time—Devara felt it the burden suddenly placed on him.

Not confusion. Disruption.

Because this was not a delay. This was deviation.

’A story without its center.’

His gaze remained steady outwardly.

Calm. Controlled.

But within—The board had been overturned.

’If he hasn’t been born... Then what is this timeline becoming?’

Outside—The palace still celebrated.

Music played outside.

Lamps burned. Laughter echoed through the corriders.

But inside that chamber—A different realization took root.

Fate—Had either been delayed.

Or rewritten.

The chamber was no longer private.

Not truly.

Beyond the carved doors, footsteps had gathered—quiet, disciplined, heavy with understanding.

And then—They entered.

Rajmata Satyavati, Bhishma, Vidura and Gandhari

Along with Shakuni, who had already shed his earlier lightness.

They had heard enough.

Enough to understand. Enough to feel the weight of it.

The air thickened.

Satyavati’s gaze softened as it fell upon Devaki.

A mother recognizing another... who had endured what should never be endured.

Bhishma stood like a mountain carved from restraint.

But even he—Even the man who had seen wars, betrayals, and kingdoms fall—Carried a shadow in his eyes.

"I knew of Kamsa’s rise..."

he said quietly,

"...but not this."

His jaw tightened.

"To slaughter newborns..."

A pause.

"...his own sister’s children."

His voice lowered.

"Fear has not merely changed him."

"It has devoured him."

Vidura’s expression remained composed—but his silence spoke louder than outrage.

He did not interrupt.

He measured.

He understood what such cruelty meant.

Gandhari stood slightly behind—Her gaze drifting between Devaki... and Devara.

Something unspoken forming quietly within her.

The room held its breath.

And then—Devara moved finally.

Not dramatically. Not forcefully.

But with finality.

His thoughts, which had been spiraling moments ago—Now aligned.

He looked at Devaki and Vasudeva.

Directly.

His expression had changed.

"...."

No trace of the earlier calm observer.

This was something else.

"You came to the right place."

The words were steady. Certain.

"I will make sure—"

A pause.

Just enough to let the weight settle.

"—Kamsa pays for this."

Silence.

"...."

"...."

"...."

Shock followed as soon as Devara gave his promise.

Devaki’s eyes widened slightly.

Not disbelief—But something close to hope she did not dare hold.

*******************************

(Author note:)

I hope you guys give me your opinion and idea’s.

-->

Don’t forget to review guys...

  • illusion
  • illusion
  • Age
  • If you find any errors ( Ads popup, ads redirect, broken links, non-standard content, etc.. ), Please let us know < report chapter > so we can fix it as soon as possible.

    Tip: You can use left, right, A and D keyboard keys to browse between chapters.