Loopbreaker

Hey all.

I'm sitting down and reworking on book 2. Sadly the mental state I was in when I wrote book 1 and the mental state when I wrote book 2 were two totally different things. Beyond some medical stuff as well as the chemical changes from medicine my doctor had prescribed, I tried to juggle 6+ stories and ended up messing up more than I succeeded.

As such i'm sitting down and going through book 2 again, doing whatever I need to do in order to fix the shortcomings from book 2.

The genuine version of this novel can be found on another site. Support the author by reading it there.

So this is where I reach out to you and ask if you're willing to share with me in this post the things that stands out the most and need fixing. I want to get it right and I have no problem admitting that I bit off more than I could chew.

I've made a bunch of changes in my personal life. From blood tests, new medication, exercise, a little meditation, and more.

I'm back to writing and doing what I love.

So if you're willing, post what you think needs to be fixed for book 2. I'll check back in a few days, comment and then periodically check back in and update things.

Thanks again to everyone willing to help.