Basic Thaumaturgy for the Emotionally Incompetent

Let me be clear. This rewrite will NOT mean I’ll stop writing chapters for this book. The content of the book isn’t a problem; the structure is. Posting will slow down, but I’ll release at least one chapter a week and try to release two if possible.

The reason why I’m rewriting this book:

1. I’m not happy with my lack of structural planning for this version. Backfilling chapters is distracting for readers and I want to provide a more streamlined experience.
2. It’s too bloating. Scenes can be cut by 20%. Sometimes less is more.
3. I’m also not happy with Fabrisse’s progression rate. It’s something I’m amending in the second book, but I should’ve done this earlier. He spends too much time dilly-dallying, and while that’s fine, I could’ve made the dilly-dallying worth the gain.
4. I’m not happy with how the system is represented. It pops up too often and gets too convoluted at times. I might think about simplifying the magic system a bit as well, but not so much that it loses its, well, magic.
5. I need to repackage content to ensure solid progression in the main storyline. Side-stories like adventures with Severa are fun, but ultimately unnecessary. They’ll be Patreon-exclusive content in the new version.
6. People tell me to not bother with rewrites, but I love this world I’ve created so much to let it go. The content has never been a problem. I believe we have something special here and we just need some tweaking.

My new book Maximum Intimidation Knight is doing all the things I should have been doing, and it’s set to be my biggest success. With some planning, I think this is achievable with Thaumaturgy. I’ll be writing the rewrite in tandem with the new chapters, and they’ll be Patreon-exclusive content, to however few patrons there are lul. Thanks for your support.

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